I Just Wrote A Song Can Anyone Give Me Opinions Thanks

[14yearoldkid]

THIS SONG IS WRITTEN FOR THIS GIRL ITS CALLED EVERYTHINGS A LIE ITS JUST A RECORDING OF ME AND A GUITAR RECORDED ON MY COMP THE RECORDING IS NOT HIGH QUALITY
THANKS HERE IT IS


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/bryanandrademusic.htm

 

[Purge]

Hey, you already posted this somewhere else and got quite a few responses.

 

[14yearoldkid]

yeah

yeah but now i wanna know about the songwriting