I beat writers block tonight!

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Tell me if what I came up with is crap:

"If fall underneath the weight of all that burdens me
my expectations and interpretations of what I should be

I may have thrown away my past and I may fall again today
But I can only give tomorrow what I've learned from yesterday"
 
I like.

Well it depends on how it will be presented but it sounds tight.
 
Not bad.

It reminds me of what I tend to write when I have writers block. Such as right now. (sigh)

Lots of "I" statements. Very internal subjects and lyrics that amount to thinking out loud in rhyme. Not that its bad to do that... just a pattern I've noticed. Hard to make a story out of most of the time, but usually ends up being a good seed that gets used later on.

Good bit, though. Definitely has potential.

-Chris
 
Good luck on the rest of it.

He should whittle down all the things he's not. Then he can realise what he is. You know, he's not dominated by money...or whatever.
 
I always feel blocked so sometimes I just try to write anyway. Glad to hear you made it past your writers block. Nice stuff.



Violent5
 
nice, writers block sucks I struggle with it from time to time, .. good luck
 
"Twists"

Very insightful
Now try this way to approach it
Use these ideas cafeteria style, pick-n-choose, experiment....

One day I had this thought...
The next thing I knew....
And then somebody said....
Then I realized....
But I'll always....
But if I never....

make up your own "twists"

writeonnnnnnn
chazba
 
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