Human Radio - Mix Track

[guyai]

Hi there! I am new here!

I would like to have some feedback from a few of my mixes.

Here is one of the last ones!

Thanks!

 

[BroKen_H]

"Fast" @ :30 is very slushy. Nice build-fall structure. Great little tune. Good performance. The guitar on the right is hard on the ears after a while. Vocal is maybe 1-2dB strong. Lead bounce is okay, but the tone of that guitar is harsh. Centered stereo has a "better" tone, but a bit loud. Pop listeners probably wouldn't notice. A lot of the stereo field is a bit extreme. Maybe narrow it in a bit. Not quite so LCR.
Song is well composed and written. Well performed. Good job!

 

[Bruthish]

I think its pretty well done. Good catchy voice and melody. Can hear everything pretty well. Nice sounding verb on the vocals and background vocals.

 

[dobro]

I find the mix on the brightish side. That oscillating guitar that comes in at 2.30 just hurts though. Way too sharp.

Nice tune, arrangement and delivery.

 

[TripleM]

Overall I thought this was quite good. Good singing. Things in general are well performed. The bass part was cool.

I thought the distorted guitar on the right could be improved. Sounded like a cheap solid state amp.

yeah the back and forth guitar at about 2:30 isn't working for me either. On headphones it makes you dizzy.

The volume push on the vocal at 2:58 is very obvious.

The reverb made it sound like a schloky 80's tune.

I like the bass part, but it gets a little rumbly in spots.

Drums are a little loud relatively to everything else.

I'm focusing too much on the negatives. It sounded good.

 

[chambie]

I really like the song. Nicely put together, and i think the lead vocal is spot on. The guitar in the right is annoying to me right from the start.. too harsh for my taste.. if you can tame that .. i'd say it's pretty good. The dynamics of the song are great. And i think it's one of the best drum tracks i've heard on here. Great job !!

 

[mjbphotos]

I'm with Broken in that a lot of it seems panned to far - verse 2 guitar way over on the right and toms over on the left is noticeable, bringing in the overall 'width' for some of the tracks would work (just my preference). The ping-ponged guitar at 2:30 is definitely harsh. At the soft part - 2:52 the vocals (and overall volume) come down too far for this section. Same thing happens at 3:45 - volume comes down enough that a listener might go to turn up the volume. I'm not one to 'squash' tracks, but did you put any compression/limiter on the master track?