How do yall think I did with this project?

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Noddy301

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O.K I have an assignment where I have to revamp a poem by Eloise Greenfield and I obviously decided to make it into a rap. Anyways heres the beat I will go to DOWN IN THE MUSIC http://soundclick.com/noddyeast

Poem

I get way down in the music
Down inside the music
I let wake me, take me
Spin me around and shake me

Uh, I get down

Inside the sound of the Jackson
Five, Into the tune of Earth,
Wind and Fire
Down in the band where the beat comes
From
Down in the horn and down in the drum

I get down
Uh, I get down

I get way down in the music
Down inside the music
I let wake me, take me
Spin me around and shake me

I get down...I get down,
Uh, I get down

I obviously will change a couple of words to help the flow of it...but lemme know if the beat can click with this. Try and see if you can see where Im going with it :D
 
Real like that beat man, love the re-verb on the bass drum, real fat sound but still smooth. I could see those lyrics work over the piano too. Good job.
 
Thnx you guys...over time I learned not to go by my own ear
 
Im not sure i listen to the right track, wa si t called noddy gon mad? But that was madd hot, mixing was very very clean and beat was hot, except for that annoying dude goin aye aye throughout the hwole beat, but man that was amdd clean
 
Naw thats the wrong one but thanx. I accidently took the Down in the music joint down and it probably wont go back up until bout 5:30 cuz Im at school right now
 
Its back up now if anybody else wanted to check it out...Anyways I presented it already and Da GuRls were BYTIN!!!
 
im feelin that shit! that is . . . . akin to the flames inside ya banner! - dam do i got som elyrics for that
 
gullyjewelz said:
im feelin that shit! that is . . . . akin to the flames inside ya banner! - dam do i got som elyrics for that
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Mos Def :D
 
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