Okay, I don't mean to be rude, but they sound like utter crap. It sounds like a drum machine programmed by someone who does not have a solid grasp on how drum beats are composed. Also, the guitars sound like they are lined in through a pod and they are constantly getting out of time with the drums. The bass sounds good, but it also falls out of time constantly too. My best advice would be for you to find a real drummer and have him help you learn to program your drum machine to sound more like real drum beats or at least programmed to fit the music. Also, make sure to concentrate on playing in time with the drums; they are the backbone of the music.
