Hot off the presses: Unbelievable

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Hi, all:

I usually follow the MP3 mixing clinic. I just finished a first mix of a song I made up (playing and singing all the parts except the drum loops which I threw together from a CD), and would like the opinions of other writers.

myspace.com/garyroyer

Thanks for your input!

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A better link to Unbelievable

I just realized that the link I posted may not work.

Try this:

http://www.myspace.com/garyroyer

Oops! I thought I was creating a clickable link to the site. Oh well, you song writers can paste the address into your browsers.
 
Well?

My post has 59 hits, but no comments? Come on, song writers, is it any good?
 
Well?

84 views and absolutely NO COMMENTS OR REPLIES. Is my stuff that bad? Surely someone can improve the last verse; which is a rehash of the first verse.

Come on lyricists and song writers! Chime in!
 
Well since I´m not a native English speaker I wouldn´t want to comment on the lyrics, but they appear to have a great fluency and storytelling in it. For the music/ singing and all: wow!! that´s some great stuff! Very creative drum(program?)ing, arranging and playing. Love your voice.
 
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