hiphop tracks advice

[reone]

hey guys i need some feedback or critisim on my vocals, just want to know what you guys would do, im usin a shure 58 and have a legit sound proof area but as u can tell its pretty low budget. thank you . www.myspace.com/reone .

 

[heatmiser]

Yeah, the vocals are a little low budget sounding...your delivery is good though. The sound is right on the borderline between sounding intentionally lo-fi and wanting to sound legit. If the latter, you need to get the sound much bigger and fuller. Exactly how you achieve that with your set up is beyond me. If you want a lo-fi, coming out of a tin can sound (which can be way cool) you need to go farther in that direction. Depends on what you're going for. Sorry I can't be more help.