Hide the Bones (Remix)

[g0dmoney]

Here's my newest attempt taking into account the advice I received in the first thread. Please let me know if you can think of anything else I can do to improve on this. I truly appreciate all the help I got in the first place.

Explicit lyrics, you've been warned.

Here's both versions.

New Version

Old Version

 

[g0dmoney]

bumpity bump bump bump

 

[rayc]

A touch of the Kurt's in the vox.
The bass could use just a little definition (a little 3khz peak).
For my stoner rock tatses I'd like the vocal down a little lower (like in the change) OR the guitars & bass up a little more.
I like the change/chorus in the guitars but I'm not a fan of talk/rap evil vocals. I'd much rather hear 'em sung.
VERY cool song nevertheless.

 

[g0dmoney]

A touch of the Kurt's in the vox.
The bass could use just a little definition (a little 3khz peak).
For my stoner rock tatses I'd like the vocal down a little lower (like in the change) OR the guitars & bass up a little more.
I like the change/chorus in the guitars but I'm not a fan of talk/rap evil vocals. I'd much rather hear 'em sung.
VERY cool song nevertheless.

What's a touch of Kurt's in the vox? Not sure I understand what you mean. Yeah you're probably right about the volume issues. I'll see what I can do about the rest. Thanks!

 

[WhiteStrat]

I agree with RayC on the vocals issue--maybe down just a tad so they sit more "side by side" with the guitars.

But this sounds great. Nice work!