Hi ... Check out my new rap song "can`t stop my shine" ...
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The way you 've mixed the vocals makes the track hard to listen to. Double vocal tracks, like this with one on each side, is best for the hook. Your verses would benefit from having one centered vocal track, with maybe some doubles on parts that need highlighting...but more subtle.
The lyrics seems to be quite simple, not really bad but nothing quotable either. However, some of the lyrics were actually drowned out and hard to catch because of the mixing-thing I commented on first here. So I might have missed some key parts.
The singing vocals on the "Want You Back"-track are actually somewhat interesting...it borders on being a bit weird and not so good, but I think it came out OK. Keep working on the singing, and that might be quite allright
I hope this was helpfull, maybe it seems a bit harsh, but I only tried to be honest.
Keep making songs, and things will only improve with time
Peace!
The lyrics seems to be quite simple, not really bad but nothing quotable either. However, some of the lyrics were actually drowned out and hard to catch because of the mixing-thing I commented on first here. So I might have missed some key parts.
The singing vocals on the "Want You Back"-track are actually somewhat interesting...it borders on being a bit weird and not so good, but I think it came out OK. Keep working on the singing, and that might be quite allright
I hope this was helpfull, maybe it seems a bit harsh, but I only tried to be honest.
Keep making songs, and things will only improve with time
Peace!
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