Alright, the power ballad!
Typing as I'm listening.
THe vocals sound live, which is kind of cool.
Yeah, this is total 80s power ballad. Pretty good singing too. I know that the power chord electrics are coming up sometime soon. But wait, you have something different at 2:00, the mix there sounds good. When the electrics do come in I think there's some mixing issues. It sounds like the rhythm electric guitar takes over the song... maybe lower that a notch or work some EQ magic to get the instruments out of the way of each other. It's too loud compared to the lead too.
Overall, pretty cool recording... it does have a live feel to it to me. Good work.