Heres one of my latest..hope you like it

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EpiSGpl8r

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Unfortunattly i haven't been able to finish this song yet but i just started so i'll be done within a week..

Verse:
What do i have
to be ashamed of
I understand my
Reason for living


Chorus:
I just want to let go
Of all i've held on for so long
It's time that i move on

Verse:
I Feel like the only one
with dreams as high as the sky
when clouds will break my fall
I will escape my fears

Chorus

Bridge

Chorus
 
"with dreams..."I'm" high as the sky"..
"Some" clouds break my fall"


Bridge..you can use the "bird" analogy
Or you could use a "pilot" example.. "Im a Sonic pilot listen to me fly" ect.Depends on how far you want to go..Good luck..You still got some imagery to flesh out..Good start though!

Don
 
Sorry, I think it's dull...but most people don't care what I think.
 
I rekon we cant actually say if a song is 'good' or not just be seeing the lyrics. I used to think lyrics were the most important thing, but then I realized that load of songs that I like I only knew the lyrics to the main hook and a few lins of a verse.

You can writhe the greatest poetry ever biut if it doesnt sing well its not worth alot as a song surley?
 
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