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heyman109
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I ws just wondering what you guys think of this song..be nice, im 12 man. Its basicly about how I think everyones sheep.
Verse1
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Do I even Exist to you, and all the things you do?
My Rights are slowly taken away.
Im Feeling all tied up in pop
I wish this stupid crap would stop,
I want to be taken far away.
Pre-chorus
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Cuase I thought I had a place in this uptown life and future
but now I know.
Chorus
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Why must I be like you all?
Slowly decaying, being all the same.
The same
I wish for more bad weather
I want it more than ever
so you can see were the enemy ,yeah
The same.
Verse 2
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I still fell all tied up with confusion
My world is filled with dissalusion
So why do you even try?
I knew it from the start
that we wouldnt get through the ugly parts
dont you know it is all a lie?
Pre-chorus
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Cuase I thought I had a place in this uptown life and future
but now I know.
Chorus
----------
Why must I be like you all?
Slowly decaying, being all the same.
The same
I wish for more bad weather
I want it more than ever
so you can see were the enemy ,yeah
The same.
Outro thing
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Where did we all go wrong?
Its been like this for so long.
Might we ever go back that way?
instead of going into dissmay.
Allways.
This songs ok I think. Just some feedback would be cool
See you guys later.
Verse1
-----------
Do I even Exist to you, and all the things you do?
My Rights are slowly taken away.
Im Feeling all tied up in pop
I wish this stupid crap would stop,
I want to be taken far away.
Pre-chorus
---------------
Cuase I thought I had a place in this uptown life and future
but now I know.
Chorus
----------
Why must I be like you all?
Slowly decaying, being all the same.
The same
I wish for more bad weather
I want it more than ever
so you can see were the enemy ,yeah
The same.
Verse 2
---------
I still fell all tied up with confusion
My world is filled with dissalusion
So why do you even try?
I knew it from the start
that we wouldnt get through the ugly parts
dont you know it is all a lie?
Pre-chorus
---------------
Cuase I thought I had a place in this uptown life and future
but now I know.
Chorus
----------
Why must I be like you all?
Slowly decaying, being all the same.
The same
I wish for more bad weather
I want it more than ever
so you can see were the enemy ,yeah
The same.
Outro thing
---------------
Where did we all go wrong?
Its been like this for so long.
Might we ever go back that way?
instead of going into dissmay.
Allways.
This songs ok I think. Just some feedback would be cool
See you guys later.