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romi1212
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Hi guys Hope u enjoy my cover of this Beatles song thanks
Hi guys Hope u enjoy my cover of this Beatles song thanks
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It's Too Funky in Here!!!
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I detect some little issues with the cadence of the vocals in some spots,... (not criminal).
I hear a little pitchiness in the vocals on the high parts,... (nothing heinous).
I think there is a little timing issue with the transition into the bridge,... (I think the D7 and F is a 2-count/each before hitting the Bb).
On the upside, it's a well written and classic song, and there is only one Paul McCartney for a reason. Not many people can hit the high notes like him. I've hacked this song for many years, and I certainly can't hit the high notes even as well as you. Even McCartney can't hit the high notes like he used to. It's a good effort vs the thought that English might not be your primary language(?).
Best of all, I feel it takes little more than this to make the girls' panties wet.
I detect some little issues with the cadence of the vocals in some spots,... (not criminal).
I hear a little pitchiness in the vocals on the high parts,... (nothing heinous).
I think there is a little timing issue with the transition into the bridge,... (I think the D7 and F is a 2-count/each before hitting the Bb).
On the upside, it's a well written and classic song, and there is only one Paul McCartney for a reason. Not many people can hit the high notes like him. I've hacked this song for many years, and I certainly can't hit the high notes even as well as you. Even McCartney can't hit the high notes like he used to. It's a good effort vs the thought that English might not be your primary language(?).
Best of all, I feel it takes little more than this to make the girls' panties wet.
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romi1212
Member
I detect some little issues with the cadence of the vocals in some spots,... (not criminal).
I hear a little pitchiness in the vocals on the high parts,... (nothing heinous).
I think there is a little timing issue with the transition into the bridge,... (I think the D7 and F is a 2-count/each before hitting the Bb).
On the upside, it's a well written and classic song, and there is only one Paul McCartney for a reason. Not many people can hit the high notes like him. I've hacked this song for many years, and I certainly can't hit the high notes even as well as you. Even McCartney can't hit the high notes like he used to. It's a good effort vs the thought that English might not be your primary language(?).
Best of all, I feel it takes little more than this to make the girls' panties wet.
awesome suggestions
thanks a lot for hearing so keenly and advising me
English is certainly not my primary language which makes my accent somewhat different
i started learning guitar by my self that's why my rhythm is not so perfect and i am working on it
surely i will improve in the next song
regards neel
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mrdanny
New member
A little out of tune in some parts, but not bad