HELP!!!Not Sure if Mix is Comin Out Right

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Just Curious

If you subtract ****** and What and Fuck from your song, are there any lyrics left?
You said God, Fuck, and ****** in the same song.
 
I liked the beats in it. Didn't listen to the words much, but the vocal style seems to fit in the mix ok. i'd say you are heading in the right direction.
 
Constructive Lyric Talk

Lets talk about your lyrics.
You have a song about smoking weed and dressing in black with hood on your face breaking in a safe...and you have guns on both of your sides. What in the FUCK is wrong with you?
Is this helping society?
Is hip hop full of these horrible messages a good thing?

Why would you want to brag about breaking the law and saying these awful things?
Are guns cool?
Do you like families torn apart by drugs and guns?
Please enlighten me sir.
 
I think there's not enough bass action happening. The kick sounds like it was turned up to the point of distortion then limited, where maybe just some eq would have helped. Maybe needs a thumpier/thicker bassline happening with that synth.

I don't like the clickety-clickety high hat thing.

The mix sounds ok to me.
 
homerecorder1 I'm sorry if you don't like my lyrics..I write what I like I just post here to ask people if my quailty & mixing sounds good


but

1. N**ger? I said NIGGA!...people don't seem to understand they don't mean the same


2. I am in no way shape or form a gangster or hard acting guy


3. That tracks is about people never wanting to help you get to the top, they only wanna come after...I use to have a crew but they never wanted to do shit or help get the music going so I left and started doing my own thang , that aslo lead me to do this track



and hey man no hard feelings...thanks for peeping my stuff
 
I dig it, man. I think the mix is good. My only beef is that the vox seem too eq'd -- too much high end.

edit: i realized that that is supposed to be a eminem-esque "telephone" vocal. in that case it is not eq'd enough, and not distorted enough.
 
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