Help a brutha out.

[guitarmonkus]

Hey dudes, I need some help here. There is this little 40 second clip of a song I'm working on on my website that I put up. It's called backwardsincomplete. I have NO idea where to go next with this, and was wondering if anyone had any advice? Maybe an idea of a new direction or something. Or even if it's worth it to finish it? Thanks for your time!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=481924

 

[Dogman]

Well, I like what I hear so far.....if it built up, or even came in hard, abruptly, I would continue to listen. If it stayed the same, I would lose interest. It's got nice sounds, but some drama, and dynamics would help to take it further.
Just my thoughts.