Hardcore/Metal/Hip Hop tune enclosed, let me know what you think

[monkeymanx]

Thats the link. It's called Angel's Wings. I already know I went a bit off key during the chorus, which we eventually be corrected(not using a pitch corrector). It's fairly heavy and tuned to Drop A on the ol' baritone guitar. Let me know what you think.

 

[Dogman]

Pretty cool man...I dig the tone on the guitars. Nice. My only nit, might be to dry out teh vox a bit when it's quieter....they sound a bit different for the cleaner stuff. Drier might sound better. The rest..the heavy stuff is cool. Nice and percussive.
Cool song man.....

 

[EL34]

I like the dropped tuned heavy bottom thang.

Sounds even and fine to me.

The ending power chord could be changed to something less predictable, but that's nitpicking.

 

[timboZ]

Nice job. I like how the vocals sound.
What did you use for a mic and FX's on the vox?

Are the drums and bass real or programed. The sound nice.

 

[monkeymanx]

Yes... I love it when people ask if the bass and drums are real or programmed... It means I'm probably doing a good job of masking it... They are programmed.

I use the Shure Beta 87c for a vocal mic. FX are just some EQing, compression, and reverb. Actually the rapping has a slight delay to thicken it up to, 20ms and isn't very wet, only about 20% or so.

Sometimes it is good to be predictable. I've written alot of progressive style songs with no repeating parts that have things that come out of nowhere, I figured I would go back to a bit more A/B structure and predictability for awhile.

The fx actually arn't to wet on the mix. I really held back on the reverb, my last project had the vox loaded up with reverb.

Thanks for the kind words and comments.

 

[SnakeDog5050]

Yeah monkey, bass sounds excellent on my system. Good synth work too.
Sounds real good when it goes heavy, nice sounds.
Yeah the whole thing sounds good to me, I have nothing to recommend on this one. Cheers!