Guitar Instrumental for your critique

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Nice tune, Dragonworks...

While not the best recording job quality-wise, I really like the melody you put together on the guitar.
It has a kinda "Egyptian" feel running through it.

The guitar tone is nice and fat.
Very well-structured tune.

Until the ending....Fade it out! :D

Have you considered re-recording it?


VI
 
Really cool melody man...I am digging the guitar work in a big way...the bass is too up front and the rhythmn guit is way too loud...drums sound good....I think it needs more seperation....the piano is hard to hear...what I do hear sounds good though...

real nice piece of music....I dig it man..

Joe

P.S. You should be getting a package from me today via UPS...

Take it easy man,
Joe
 
AHHH--- something that never gets played on the radio any more good ole fashion guitar!!!! I liked!!!!!!
 
This sounded very original to me. Usually you can hear who the player likes in their original songs. The "egyptian" part was cool and came out of nowhere, I like surprises in songs, Thanks for the post.
 
Very cool tune! Are you gonna rerecord it? The only thing that is suffering in this is the recording quality... Great melodic ideas and cool use of harmonic minor!

All in All... very well written!

Good Job

Shred
 
very nice playing.........some nice melodies were repeated on too which I like.........I like the tone.......it's almost hard to match this to a certain genre.....seems like the influences are being pulled from all over to make one style which is cool.........
 
around 2:30 I could hear (in me head) like a chorus of ooohs and aahhs

I like the piano in there, it lightens up the texture of the tune

the lead could be a little hot, I'm not quite sure, and maybe the piano could be brought up a tad

on second listen, how 'bout some piano for a outro?

enjoyed
 
Nice music!

Nice writing and cool playing. I can't add a anything to what's already been said - but I concur with the critiques. A re-do would be in order - a cleaner overall sound would really be cool. The tune is quite nice - worth the time methinks!!
~Milan
 
Very cool. It reminds me of old Allman Brothers. Good stuff. As others have said, the recording is lacking sparkle but the guitar playing is great. I'm not digging the drum sound. It's flat. And the execution is not solid in time like it should be to support the track.

Rerecord it with a click and you'll really have something there.
 
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