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justinwhite
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i know the lead isnt great but all in all let me know what you guys think
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TripleM
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There are few seconds of silence at the beginning and the end that you might want to trim off.
Singer has a nice voice. I liked the acoustic guitar sound. Actually the slide guitar on the right side sounded good too.
Is there an edit at around :47 or so? Sounds like some little skip there.
The bass has a low end rumble. I'm thinking on a big playback system, that's going to sound bad.
Programmed drums sound programmed.
Harmonies in the chorus would be nice. A double tracked lead vocal would sound cool there too.
Singer has a nice voice. I liked the acoustic guitar sound. Actually the slide guitar on the right side sounded good too.
Is there an edit at around :47 or so? Sounds like some little skip there.
The bass has a low end rumble. I'm thinking on a big playback system, that's going to sound bad.
Programmed drums sound programmed.
Harmonies in the chorus would be nice. A double tracked lead vocal would sound cool there too.
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justinwhite
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thanks for the commentsThere are few seconds of silence at the beginning and the end that you might want to trim off.
Singer has a nice voice. I liked the acoustic guitar sound. Actually the slide guitar on the right side sounded good too.
Is there an edit at around :47 or so? Sounds like some little skip there.
The bass has a low end rumble. I'm thinking on a big playback system, that's going to sound bad.
Programmed drums sound programmed.
Harmonies in the chorus would be nice. A double tracked lead vocal would sound cool there too.
trimmed the time on front and back. took away some of the low end and added some treble to the bass
no edit just my wacko toshiba laptop it was proably over heating lol grrrr. not sure what to do with the drums any ideas would be helpful. as far as harmonies. i never picked up the nack for em any other ideas would be great
aaronmcoleman
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Yeah the chorus seems to be begging for some backing vocals
acoustic is nice
bass has good tone, could maybe be tamed a bit in the low mids area...kinda builds up a bit. but overall nice bass.
drums, change the beat more. the highhat stands out the most to me as being kinda fake...I think it's the the way it just stays on beat the whole way through. I also can't hear the kick.
I'd also bring up the piano and lead guitar(?) I can' really hear either well until the very end.
overall sounds pretty good! nice performances. Sounds like a lot to fix, but when it gets pretty close, that's when it's easiest to make suggeststions!
acoustic is nice
bass has good tone, could maybe be tamed a bit in the low mids area...kinda builds up a bit. but overall nice bass.
drums, change the beat more. the highhat stands out the most to me as being kinda fake...I think it's the the way it just stays on beat the whole way through. I also can't hear the kick.
I'd also bring up the piano and lead guitar(?) I can' really hear either well until the very end.
overall sounds pretty good! nice performances. Sounds like a lot to fix, but when it gets pretty close, that's when it's easiest to make suggeststions!
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justinwhite
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thanks for the input. ill see if i cant tighten the bass up a bit n mess with the drums