Sounds very dry, a little leaning to the left in stereo image & suddenly gets louder - why?
The bass needs some work - I can JUST hear something I think is bass. Give it a -5 cut at 100, a boost of 5 at 100 & a boost of 4 at 3k.
Now, it kind of sounds like everything is competing with everything else except for a cymbal & the lead.
Go back & remix from the drums up BUT don't go anywhere until you have the rhythm section sorted.
The playing seems pretty good.
Onme last thing - the playing seems to be comprtent but a bit lacklustre/passionless. Go back in & add some dynamics.
Something went horribly wrong w/ the file the first time... I revisited it yesterday, the Mixcraft version had somehow smeared a low-pass filter across, instead of 16K, it was at 1K or so... Anyway - new mix, should be better!