Overall I like the mix. The drums are a little "unconvincing." Maybe you wanted them to sound electronic--if that's the case, I'd drive 'em a little so they break up a bit. They're a bit weak sounding and that might give 'em some edge.
Nice guitar work with the wah. And I like the way the tune moves--nice variety in complexity as it develops.
You're myspace page says your just learning--I'd say you're off to a good start. Keep it up!
The drums are a little "unconvincing." Maybe you wanted them to sound electronic--if that's the case, I'd drive 'em a little so they break up a bit. They're a bit weak sounding and that might give 'em some edge.