funk song

[stupidfatnugly]

http://myspace.com/stupidfatandugly

called: "Addict"

how's the mix?

 

[WhiteStrat]

Overall I like the mix. The drums are a little "unconvincing." Maybe you wanted them to sound electronic--if that's the case, I'd drive 'em a little so they break up a bit. They're a bit weak sounding and that might give 'em some edge.

Nice guitar work with the wah. And I like the way the tune moves--nice variety in complexity as it develops.

You're myspace page says your just learning--I'd say you're off to a good start. Keep it up!

 

[stupidfatnugly]

The drums are a little "unconvincing." Maybe you wanted them to sound electronic--if that's the case, I'd drive 'em a little so they break up a bit. They're a bit weak sounding and that might give 'em some edge.

i want them as real as possible but what is this "driving" technique? I want them to sound more powerful that's why I added the claps.

You're myspace page says your just learning--I'd say you're off to a good start. Keep it up!

thank you very nice to hear