"FRAGMENTS" - hows the song/mix ?

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Sounds pretty good, man. I find the bass drum a little boomy, lacks life, and the drums a little too low in general. But I love the tune, the vocals sound great...and it's nice to hear a modern sounding tune with some killer guitar...I'd say just bring up the drums a bit and you're flying. Great voices and dynamcs in this tune, it's really cool.
 
Opening guitar feels too quiet (bass overwhelms its impact) to really give it the presence it needs to open the song. And when the power chords kick in as loud as they do, that opening guitar line is swamped and becomes insignificant, and one gets the feeling it shouldn't have been there in the first place. The thing is, it should be (and deserves to be), so bringing up that opening guitar would help, I think.

Personally, I find the transition from a single guitar line to fully cranked double-tracked stuff a bit too much, i.e., makes the previous guitar pale in comparison, so some 'spatial processing' might give it some body and keep it more 'significant' in the mix during the transition to the double-tracked gtrs.

That new vox mic sounds nice, although the verse lead vox is 'dimensionally' flat compared with when the double tracking kicks in on choruses (where it sounds much more effective). Similar to the above guitar scenario, I guess. Don't get me wrong, I like contrasts, and I suppose that's a feature of this kind of music, but I think contrasts still require a 'continuity' of sorts in order to make them work effectively: not jarring, but stunning.
 
Sounds a little dull...the overall mix that is...maybe just the mp3 encoding.Also it sounds to me it like the lead vocals could be turned down a tad to bring everything in place more.
And its nice to hear leads in music...maybe i just got sick of the whole grunge phase...it seems like every band now a days (most anyways) didnt or dont include leads...wtf 's up with that?
Anyways...nice freaking job man! :D
 
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