First track of 2007 from Groove UK, comments appreciated

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Sounds very cool and good to me :D Cool bass tone. Could use more kick for my ears, other than that drums sound excellent.
Vocals sound great! At the very begining the vox are a hair on the boxy side.
When she kicks up the power it goes away for the most part. Not sure what to tell you I'd try pulling very little 500, possibly adding a hair around 15k or a combo of the two. To be clear I'm talking very minor adjustments. I'd rather it was as is than turn harsh any day;)
There's one place the piano comes in that it's a bit to loud for me but my player does not show the time so I can't tell you. The flange on the vocals at the end make her words indestinguishable (how do you spell that?) to me.
At that point they are more like an effect than vocals as is. I know that might be just what you wanted. To me the flange/echo gets a bit to over the top. I like to understand the words. On the other hand, considering the repeditive nature of that section of vocals I think you did the right thing by morphing them into a sound I would clean them up for the last time she say's the line right at the end of the song.

Well that's all I have :D

Incase I gave you the wrong idea I think this is a pretty fantastic job!

She's a very good singer by the way. Reminds me a little of Lisa lobe but more womanly.

F.S.
 
The bass drum does need a little something - it's a bit papery.
What's the click happening in the 1st verse - sounds like a fake scratched record without the sense of the record making a cycle - isotope?
The cymbal in the chorus sounds odd at centre.
Nice vocal job - could use some thickening when the harmonies are happening as it gets a little lost.
Good work.
 
Just FYI = the soundclick link crashed my WM player when it loaded so I went to Soundclick to listen instead...

Something seems to be distorting when it hits - happening throughout the verses - almost like the kick or something. Could be a soundclick MP3 thing.... The bass guitar seems a bit hot compared to the vocals - especially at the beginning...Thus vocals could come up IMHO....The effected vocals could definitely come up - they are very cool....The drums/keys bass/vocals are all recorded with great fidelity though - the tones are very nice....
Excellent Electronica - well written......

:) :D :) :D
 
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