First time posting a song in the clinic...Guitar jazz/rock...feedback/advice needed

[mcmd]

dachay2tnr:

I just didn't do a good job with the rhythm section...and yea the levels are off.

...there seems to be a change in tone around 1:54, and I love that tone, but it doesn't stick around long enough.

..thats interesting, the high gain is all the neck PU, so it must be how I played that part?
Thanks for listening and the comments!


Lt. Bob:

Thanks for listening and the collab offer....I'll pm you.

boydrj:

I was listening in lo-fi and the mix sounded great ....

... now did you smoke one before you hit PLAY....you are too kind...

Thanks for listening

B.SABBATH:

Thanks for listening man.

pglewis:

It sounds like the guitars are run direct,...

They all are except for the high gain solo. I know that I can get a better sound running through my Boogie, but the amp +kids = never works!

The delay was 300ms ( at 100bps) ...that should be working?
Glad you also liked the tune. Thanks for all the comments.

Matt303:
..no, it wasn't a cassette player ( wish I could say it was!). I'm just a beginner on the bass, - so with practice it should get better. Glad you liked the song.
Thanks for the time.

Barometer:

Well, the comments cover more than I know....

...looks like I'm in the same boat!
Thanks for listening.

Again, thank-you everyone for the help. I got a ton of feedback and on-point comments!

Dara

 

[pglewis]

I know that I can get a better sound running through my Boogie, but the amp +kids = never works!

Yeah, that guitar work would sound even more sweet through the mesa cranked up. Hope you find time to cut the amp loose on some recordings.

The delay was 300ms ( at 100bps) ...that should be working?

No clue on the bpm math for the tempo. Listening closely again I don't think it's the delay... the tempo sounds right when the lead takes off. I think what I initially heard is the melody at 1:28 might be rushed just the tiniest bit and my ears attibuted it to the delay. It such a little thing, but it stuck out to me on my initial listen so I thought I'd mention it at the time. Now that I'm listening to it so closely I'm not sure I wasn't imagining things.

Like Track Rat, I thought of George Benson when I heard this. It's a great melody and the whole piece moves along well.

 

[CrankyOne]

The drums could use some work. The snare sounds too tiny and lacks power. It's just kinda there. It really sounds midi. The guitar playing is excellent. I wish I could do some nice jamming like that. Very relaxing. I guess this is a guitarist song, and I like it, since I'm a "guitarist" myself. I'm not sure if this would go down well in the radio, though.