First song out of my studio

  • Thread starter Thread starter HangDawg
  • Start date Start date
On the first listen, I like guitar chopps, but not crazy about the sound. Also I am not big fan of such wide stereo.
The kick might be a little low or not pronounced enough, the groove is getting lost a little I think.

I like the groove and the TV voices comming in.
Just some thoughts after coupple of listens.

cheers
 
Hang=Chinese?

A little too much reverb on the lead guitar, I think. The bass doesn't have enough bass that I would like to hear, but that can be just my taste. Can't really hear much kick.

I will lsten to it more when I get home tonight. Not a bad tune tho, nice mood it creates

AL
 
Nice playing. Listening on headphones, the wide panning was a bit weird. But I might actually like it like it on speakers because I tend to like that sort of thing.

There was a cool guitar part on the right side (or left if my headphones were backwards) that disappears at about :36 and doesn't come back until near the end of the end of the song. I wish that was continued. Now I said I liked the part, but I didn't care for the tone on it. It seemed to be dripping in reverb - too much for my tastes. It's also too far back in the mix. I'd recommend bringing it forward.

The lead part had a bunch of reverb. I think it was a little too much - but only by a little. Maybe a little faster decay, and a little longer predelay would shape it up.
 
Not bad, not bad at all. Not very PC though. :D

I thought the panning was ok, 'cept for the keyboard line - should have maybe been split stereo and panned more towards the center. Could have used a little tightening up in the low end. Maybe not so much reverb on the guitar.

Very nice though - How'd you record it?
 
It was recorded with cubase through a delta 1010. I'm sure the next one will be better. I learned alot doing this one. If anyone was wondering what the voices are, I was about 7/8 ths in the bag one night while recording this song and my Mesa started picking it up. I felt it was a sign, so I recorded it and put it in the tune. I thought it was kinda cool.
 
wussup dawg........
First of all, great song and groove. ..but you know that. I'll get to the only 2 things that "stuck out" to me. ...first of all... when youre playin your bass, throw that damn pick away!! You already have kind of a midrangy tone on it, so the pick kind of over accentuates that. If you must play with a pick, fatten that fucker up.:D The only other gripe i might have is about a few spots in the song where it sounds like the groove performance gets a little lazy. It sounds like something is missing it just a little. These are very minor things mind you, I loved the song, the groove, and the guit playing...... great stuff:) mike
 
Nice tune dude!! I liked the bass tone alot. The gits were perhaps a little wet in the reverb department ( a matter of taste really) Some accents were lost in the mix. The mix seemed a little muddled at times but, nothing a little time and tweeking can't fix. Nice chops. Sounds like you had fun doing this one. I look foward to more.

Peace,
Theron.
 
Yipes! Are you sure that was your first? If it was , you're ahead of the curve. Most excellent first effort.


Twist
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top