First Song & Mix - Need outsiders constructive feedback!!!!

[lucky2122]

Hey everyone, I just recorded my first full song and mixed it. I'm not a singer but couldn't find anyone else so I sang for this song. I'm looking for feedback from others about the song and the mix. please try to be constructive so I can try to enhance my songwriting/mixing skills!

THANKS!!!

 

[aaronmcoleman]

Not bad.

I'd mellow out the bass some to make it sit a little better. Maybe some compression and cut some of the mids.

The doubled and panned guitars are good but a little fuzzy I'd cut the distortion some.

I almost never say this but it sounded a bit dry. Some slight reverb on the guitars wold be nice. Maybe a little on the drums too to make them sound a litte more natural.

Pretty good mix though!