I like the riff
I like the 2nd song even though the 1st had more variation.
I just don't like the guitar FX sound.
What can I say? I love & own all the original line up Sabbath, all the Zep, Queen's 1st 4, all the 1st 2 eras of Budgie you can buy - all of Tool, & a lot of proggie 60's/70's stuff. So I LOVE heavy metal BUT not the stuff with THAT guitar sound. - I have to admit to disliking Metallica and having no time for the NWOBHMetal. Just like I can't abide the trade mark sound of ELO/Jeff Lynne.
So, I'm a simple creature (simpleton) who can't get passed THAT sound.
Maybe I should start a thread of bands using that sound....or call it A Few of My Least favourite Things.
The most important thing is:
Keep making music, recording & sharing it.
Cheers
rayC