First Posted Mix, looking for feedback

[mogo22]

The Song is called "Rust". It's a song my old band did years ago that I wanted to redo. I can't sing so there are no vocals. I didn't want my attempt at singing getting in the way of feedback on the music. Pretty simple tune, just trying to capture the energy. Kind of repetitive without the vocals, there's a gratuitous solo @1:38

Any Feedback is appreciated.

 

[Armistice]

Recording sounds OK to me but I'd be quantizing that kick drum if I could... seems a bit random in places.

 

[Crazy Luke]

Good energy, but without vocals, you hear the rhythm guitars push and pull out of time, which is what a lot of guitar players struggle with, and something I try to improve on. I get pretty hard on myself too, especially when I solo a rhythm track and here myself "rushing" a part.

 

[seeking]

Cool song, but a bit offbeat here and there. Could be hit with the right voice

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[mogo22]

Thanks for the comments. I will go back and try to tighten it all up. The drums are loose. Studio Drummer let's you manipulate the quantizing so every thing is not so rigid. So yes the beat is slightly off but I didn't think it was at the point of being noticeable. It's not any further out than a human would be. I can snap Em back and see how it sounds.