First Post in Clinic in a Long Time

[Greg_L]

Sounds good man. The vocals are a little too out front for me. Playing and arrangement and tones are all very nice. Good job.

 

[Chili]

Sounds good man. The vocals are a little too out front for me. Playing and arrangement and tones are all very nice. Good job.

Yup, it's unanimous, gotta pull the vocals back some more. I was going to wait til I got the studio finished, but I can do it later tonight.

Thanks for the listen and comments, Greg!!!

peace.

 

[Supercreep]

I think the lead should be an acoustic, preferably a nylon string. Malleted cymbals would work nicely in this song.

The rhythm guitars sound great.

I think that there are a couple of places the vocal could have been phrased more effectively - the delivery sometimes feels rushed. Horses for courses.

Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Chili]

I think the lead should be an acoustic, preferably a nylon string. Malleted cymbals would work nicely in this song.

The rhythm guitars sound great.

I think that there are a couple of places the vocal could have been phrased more effectively - the delivery sometimes feels rushed. Horses for courses.

Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks SuperC. I had an acoustic part in support of the rhythm guitar, but it didn't work well at all. Sounded nice on its own, but horrible in the mix. If anyone wants to do a classical guitar part, I'm willing to PM a link to an mp3 sans lead guitar. That would be interesting to hear.

I agree with the vocal phrasing, it's something I've got to work on in general. Basically, I don't have the patience to do more than one or two takes. I hate punch-ins, too. So whatever I track is pretty much it. Horrible practice, I know.....

 

[Chili]

Sorry for bringing this one up to the top again.

Per everyone's suggestion, I brought the vocals down more. I don't know, I don't think I can distance myself and be objective anymore. I hear this song all day long in my head. Plus, this is still a headphone mix.

Tell me what you think.

Cool, thanks!!!