First Mix before vocals

[PaddyGordon]

Only got a guitar part add at the end and the vocals/backing vox

What do you think so far as my initial mix, anything obvious?

And one question about it

Is the lead guitar in the guitar solo too loud?
Also, the acoustic at the moment is just a guide and will be redone along with the vocals.

Twenty Three.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage

For reference:
This is also a version of the song done live at an open mic night:
Twenty-Three 1.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage

And live with a drummer that didn't belong to our band, Alex on Bass, me on Keys just as I joined the band and had only heard that song a few times

YouTube - Alex Wayt

 

[ido1957]

Sounds good no problems as far as I hear. The lead is supposed to be on par with the vocals.