Now that I am listening to you in Lo-Fi only, I have the opportunity to give you some feedback on the mix in this format.
The vocal in Lo-Fi takes on more sibilance, the s's and t's and b's ... get a little fuzzy ... so if you are using reverb it takes on more prominence at Lo-Fi.
But your mix is fine, the words are easily understandable the first listen ... and the guitar maintains a robustness. You got a good thing going and it transfers fairly well to Lo-Fi.
I think Lo-Fi is about like old 8-Track tape playing over a Sanyo reciever with 20 watt speakers ... I dunno ...
$226 in 1940 !!! LOL !!!
At Lo-Fi the guitar takes on a lot more bass, looses a lot, a lot of it's highs, those typical piiiyaaaannggggs you get on the upper notes and double stops are somewhat lost, but ... Lo-Fi provides for a more subtle accompaniement for your vocal.
The mids and the 'voicing' you do in the mids comes through more at Lo-Fi, you don't really notice that as much in the Hi-Fi. You are carrying on conversations all over that thang man !
I know the frusteration you feel as you finish one of the songs, these narrations, and we hear that at the end of this song as you smash into that last chord, ... don't do that Walter ... please, be aware of that, it is rarely appropriate ... IMHO.
You can leave us, mouth hanging slightly open in 'retrospection' as we compare his pain, with ours, as we compare our joys with those he might not have, and that is where your mastery lies, you aren't afraid of these 'dark dungeons', and you don't shame us for it, you 'allow' us to listen to these really scary stories, universal tearjerkers about the human condition.
A lot of us dress these kinds of fears up in fancy words, I know I do, you lay it out like a dirty rag blowin' on the street, so that last chord you stab, that jerks us out of the whole reverie, that reflection that you push us into, that last chord, could have been just that guitar ringing, and ringing ... and us thinking.
You are a channel, your songs are very spiritual, and the really good ones, that really get me listening, you almost always leave so effortlessly ... and I get to thinking ... and that's the key
Thanks for sharing your gifts.