Feel Good Muzik

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Ive been getting a great amount of traffic from this site alone throughout the years and I personally thank you guys. I know alot of you are not keen to hiphop but to the few who've listened to my music I personally thank you alot for saying that you loved my material. It means alot when you can change ones perception to believe in YOU ALONE.

So to go out with A bang im going to leave this inspirational hymn for EVERYONE HERE TO KEEP CHASING THEIR DREAMS.



Listen, download it, buy the album, follow me, twit me, skype me. I promise to work with anyone no matter how far my career advance.

PEACE.
 
I'm old.

I thought I was gonna get a Detroit Marvin Gaye sweet groove...and that the sweet-voiced girl waz gonna lure me in.

Then the looping. Then the rap. Then the lack of a true drum groove to move me.

The first few bars got me ready for much more. Disappointed.

With a melody, some back beat to go with the bass [nice job!] and a good singer [put the girl on the mic 500% more], and a little change-up, you'd have gotten me.

As it is, I don't get it.

Good bass. Like the line and punctuation.
 
The bass is really good but that handclap, or whatever it is, really prevents a groove happening. Remove that & there's not a lot happeningbesides acymbal & bass drum.
You really do need to revisit this & get your groove back.
You def need a change bit: a breakdown or a full on sung section. There're not enough hooks in the rap to replace a melody at this stage.
 
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