Feedback Please?

[MrWarren]

I'm a young producer, without experience.
Here is the first track I've ever recorded, please let me know what you think about it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=212797

Your free to take a guess at what equipment was used, I'll post what I actually used after a little feedback.

Thanks again.

 

[grn]

Try posting this in the MP3 Mixing Clinic, you'll get more responses.

 

[MrWarren]

Actually, I've done that, and gotten none, lol.

 

[grn]

Maybe you need a catchier title and a better message enticing people to listen...