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Hey people, once again here is my website address. www.michaelwookey.com - it has more songs now, so gimme feedback either on this board or on mine.

Thankyou so much!
 
Overall, I think the recording/mixing quality of this batch of songs is pretty decent. The arrangements are unique, which is good. I'm not that fond of the songs themselves, however. The lyrics seem forced and the singing is kind of boring. There is nothing emotional to latch onto here. They just come across as pretentious without any good reason for pretense.
 
I can't open the mp3 links... guess I will try it at home...
 
maybe it's better this way - comfort never was my favorite fix.
there's not a thing to say - that might make it all fall into place
and maybe it shouldn't be quite this easy to feel complete
and maybe i couldn't see the shadows dissappear beneath the feet

Is that emotional? I think it's shit.

Michael Wookey
 
Overall, I think the recording/mixing quality of this batch of songs is pretty decent. The arrangements are unique, which is good. I'm not that fond of the songs themselves, however. The lyrics seem forced and the singing is kind of boring. There is nothing emotional to latch onto here. They just come across as pretentious without any good reason for pretense.

I agree. Nice mixes, but the songs are lacking emotion. That being said, you have a unique sound, and I like the lyrics in parts. Keep writing!

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I'm sorry, how can you tell if what i'm singing is actually emotional or not? Maybe I was crying my eyes out...
 
Maybe, but it doesn't sound like it. It feels like you're saying the words, but not feeling them. Just an opinion, man. Sorry I can't explain it any better.

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This guy is a class A twit.
I remove the good remarks on the grounds that he is a pussy ass momma's boy.
 
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michaelwookey said:
maybe it's better this way - comfort never was my favorite fix.
there's not a thing to say - that might make it all fall into place
and maybe it shouldn't be quite this easy to feel complete
and maybe i couldn't see the shadows dissappear beneath the feet

Is that emotional? I think it's shit.

Michael Wookey

Thanks for listening. I appreciate your comments.
 
Aw no...he didn't. Did this dumbshit just take your song and shred it in his own fucking thread?

Man, I take back what I said bout this loser.

Fuckos like this piss me off. What is it about fucking brits taking other people's lyrics into their threads as soon as someone says anything not quite great??

Fuck you dude.
 
I guess it's time to bump the "this ain't personal" thread. I take the time to listen to several of his songs. I give an honest review of what I like and don't like. In response, he feels the need to attack my music (and got the lyrics wrong, anyway). Sorry if your pussy got hurt, dude. Get over it.
 
Seriously....someone fucking bites Radiohead's ass and they have the right to fucking act like a maggot to anyone who comments....after THEY asked?!?!
 
Wtf??

michaelwookey said:
Is that emotional? I think it's shit.

Michael Wookey

Dude what's with you? You put your tunes up here...I am assuming looking for some opinions and constructive critiques....and you get pissed when a dude says:

scrubs said:
Overall, I think the recording/mixing quality of this batch of songs is pretty decent. The arrangements are unique, which is good. I'm not that fond of the songs themselves, however. The lyrics seem forced and the singing is kind of boring. There is nothing emotional to latch onto here. They just come across as pretentious without any good reason for pretense.

Christ, at least he (Scrubs) took the time to listen and figure out what HE THOUGHT was good and what he liked about your songs before he pointed out what HE THOUGHT was wrong with them...

There's a real good way to get only positive opinions about your stuff...to paraphrase Jake...

go play it for your momma...

Get over yourself dude.
 
I agree with the above. You have an interesting style but you sure can't take criticism. Maybe that pretentious remark was a little harsh but you should'nt post if you can't handle negative feedback. Had I read the rest of this thread first, I would'nt have even listened at all. I will leave with my only comment being "interesting". I'm not sure how you would handle anything else. Think about this though........you let one negative comment ruin this thread before getting any other feedback that may have come along.
 
You sound like one of my writing students -- they take the class, ask for feedback, but any suggestions that I or another student make are met with hostility. If you're so great, go get a recording deal. Why hang around here?
 
Rokket said:
I can't open the mp3 links... guess I will try it at home...


Do you ever go home?
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I didn't bother to listen.
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scrubs said:
I guess it's time to bump the "this ain't personal" thread. I take the time to listen to several of his songs. I give an honest review of what I like and don't like. In response, he feels the need to attack my music (and got the lyrics wrong, anyway). Sorry if your pussy got hurt, dude. Get over it.


So he said your shit? Ok I was lost for bit there.
 
livilaNic said:
Do you ever go home?
Sure, but after reading all this, why bother to rush home just to listen to that? I would be afraid of facing his fury if I didn't like it.

Well, maybe afraid is the wrong word. Maybe not interested is a better choice.
 
ok, (clearing throat) hmm hmm. Even though you inappropriately slammed Scrubs music, I am still gonna leave a review. First I have to apologize to Scrubbs, Rokket, LivilaNic, Jake-owa, and gmiller1122 for even coming back to leave a review (I can see em all lookin for big sharp rocks to throw at me now)..............Ok, first thing is...................nevermind, I can't do it.
 
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