Here's some feedback.
First, the disclaimer....Just my opinion, and it may not be worth the time to read, but...
It's not a style I generally listen too, but I'd say the production is very good. I could hear everything very enenly in the mix, and it sounded like some "familiar" music. Not a ripoff of anything, but similar vain to some popular, and not so popular stuff. So I'd say, good recording, and good mix. Vocals sounded good, and the vibe of the music was moody, without being too depressing. As far as songwriting, I'd say it shows some good work from all angles. Lyrics, mood, and structure.
Again, just my opinion. I like music, and can appreciate the work it takes to make something that is not just noise. Good job.
Ed
