feedback please - "on my side"

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damn, Gully.. I think you have a banger right here.. you just need to bring the drums up abit in the mix and compress them to hit a little harder..but you can do that when you get vocals for the track to make sure everything is in the own space...


nice work fam..
 
DAM!!! im bout floatin on cloud 9 wit a comment like that from TALENT! thanks!
 
Thats a tight track! I wasn't sure when it started out but when the beat came in I was definitely feelin' it. I like the way you did the drums too. Keep it up!
 
thanks . . . i guess that is one of my keeperz then . . . now if i can shop that shit for a sale! i need money! lol
 
J-Lane said:
Thats a tight track! I wasn't sure when it started out but when the beat came in I was definitely feelin' it. I like the way you did the drums too. Keep it up!
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Yeah I was thinking the same thing.

Maybe make the intro slightly more interesting? Also I think the bass kinda seems a lil bit too muddy. Pretty dope though.
 
I hear parts of that precussion line auto-panning in my head lol. It's a pretty nice track. I can't really tell on my notebook what the levels really are, as the drums don't sound too low, I got quarter inch speakers on this shit lol
 
I kinda wanna use this one...you know, for recreational purposes, I aint gonna make money off of ya
 
I would say flavor up that intro a little bit more and clean up the drums a little bit more. Bass hits too hard on my headphones, it's a little muddy on bigger woofers.

Sounds like you're using hard 808s..gotta be careful with those sometimes. If you can find a good 808 synth instead of the one-hitters you could do some major damage with it.

Swap the woodblocks with some nice crisp claps and see where it takes you mayne.

Fiev
 
True...Well Gully if you want to change anything just say so and I can hold up on recording for a bit
 
The synthesizer sounds are cool as fuck. Nice job with them.
Bass seemed a little overpowering - though that might be my room which has some serious modes.

Overall it's quite listenable. I like.
 
i may make soem changes . . . but go for the verse . . . im usually slow to track adjustments . . . adn do em better after i hear a whole song u know, wit lyrics on em
 
Well damn, I wrote and recorded a verse but my mic is messin up! I dunno how long its gonna take to fix, it shouldnt be very long.
 
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