Overall I like the ideas, cool lazy groove going on.
The drums kinda lack power and punch to pound out the groove better.
The bass sound doesnt thrill me, the fuzz tone works but I'd look into some more modern up to date sounds if you can. (you can double it with another track/sound too, to make it fatter)
I like the vocal, good capturing attitude, but I would alternate/contrast it with some clean harmonies. When you get to the bridge, the crunchy/distorted tones are too overdone (for my taste)
Overall the energy/emotion kept me interested through the song. I think you could make it better though if your open to sticking around and learning in the clinic.
Thanks for sharing your work.
Pete