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Emusic
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I scetched a melody tonight and are putting it up here.
Question is; is the melody line good enough? (both in verse, pre-chorus and chorus)
The words is something I sang directly from the top of my head so never mind those. The arrangement sucks and all and all its a piece of... lets call it a scetch shall we?
But the question remains; is the melody line good enough to work further on?
I cant figgy out and turn to you for some help.
The final vocal will be sung by a brilliant female vocalist, but feel free to comment my voice if you have to
Basically; the melody?
Here is the scetch
Question is; is the melody line good enough? (both in verse, pre-chorus and chorus)
The words is something I sang directly from the top of my head so never mind those. The arrangement sucks and all and all its a piece of... lets call it a scetch shall we?
But the question remains; is the melody line good enough to work further on?
I cant figgy out and turn to you for some help.
The final vocal will be sung by a brilliant female vocalist, but feel free to comment my voice if you have to

Basically; the melody?
Here is the scetch
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