Feedback on my mix ? ( I'm only 15 please tell me how to improve )

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Alright so I just turned 15 and I really want to be an audio engineer/producer when I grow up.
I know my remix may be mostly out of your zones because its more in the HipHop/Rap genre, but please listen to it and tell me what you think.

I don't need much feedback on the video unless it's simple, cuz I honestly had 16 minutes on my camera to record it, was able to get 3 different shots, and kept switching them around when editing.
My next video I put up I want with a better camera, and an actual music video to see how that goes.

But yeah, if you listen to HipHop/Rap feel free to subscribe btw :)

- Jovi

Video/Mix - youtube.com/watch?v=EtKCmf-sH1c
( Copy paste it, I need to have 10 posts to be able to put links and im pretty new -.- )
 
You should get out of the hip hop rap genre and make real music :D
 
Yo need more bass on your vocals. But the rest is really good... Wat equipment are you usin?
 
It might be better to post the original with your remix so we can tell what you did.

What I did hear sounded great but how much of that was you i have no idea, Ya feel me? lol!
 
dreib said:
It might be better to post the original with your remix so we can tell what you did.

What I did hear sounded great but how much of that was you i have no idea, Ya feel me? lol!
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What you mean how much of that was me ? All the rapping was me. Lyrics for the chorus remained the same, and I wrote my verse.
Here's original : youtube.com/watch?v=T_Mt6Isew_0

You should get out of the hip hop rap genre and make real music
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Problem is I can't sing :( I play piano how ever .

Yo need more bass on your vocals. But the rest is really good... Wat equipment are you usin?
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Thanks, I guess I took off to much with the EQ.
And I'm using a TASCAM US 144 mk II with an Audio Technica At4040 mic.
 
did you do any of the music, or just the rapping.

"player since age 6"...impressive.

and I am not a "sack of sh*t" haha
 
Jovi said:
What you mean how much of that was me ? All the rapping was me. Lyrics for the chorus remained the same, and I wrote my verse.
Here's original : youtube.com/watch?v=T_Mt6Isew_0



Problem is I can't sing :( I play piano how ever .



Thanks, I guess I took off to much with the EQ.
And I'm using a TASCAM US 144 mk II with an Audio Technica At4040 mic.
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Well then, Im impressed. I bet you could sing, its called auto-tune and it fits right in with your genre...well, nowadays i guess all genre's!
 
dreib said:
Well then, Im impressed. I bet you could sing, its called auto-tune and it fits right in with your genre...well, nowadays i guess all genre's!
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Nonononoo... im actually pretty bad ... even with autotune LOL.

did you do any of the music, or just the rapping.

"player since age 6"...impressive.

and I am not a "sack of sh*t" haha
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Nah I took the instrumental off youtube... haven't got to producing my own beats yet.
And where did you get " I am not a sack of sh1t from ? : S xDD
 
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