Edilades, a pop/dance song

[Music Box]

Hi. This is an old tune of mine. Please tell what you think of the composition or other aspects of the tune.

Edilades by Tempomaster | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Music Box]

Here is a slightly eq edited version. Noticed how the mix sounds bad. Still not good. No time to fix it better now.

Edilades by Tempomaster | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[TripleM]

Sounds were generally good (for as much as I know about this genre). I thought the synth tones were nice. The song moved well.

When the song kicked in at :15, the low end went away.

 

[VomitHatSteve]

I couldn't listen too critically, but it sounded alright.

 

[Music Box]

Thank you for the comments and tips. I don't have time to mix it now but I will return to fix it