K
Kagemono
New member
Your honest opinion will be much appreciated thanks.
Drippy by Kagemono | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Drippy by Kagemono | Free Listening on SoundCloud
VomitHatSteve
Hat STYLE. Not contents.
It sounds like you're doing that thing where the kick massively compresses the mix so that it sounds huge. That's not a great match for lo-fi hip hop and other such "chill" genres.
I might also put more sustain on those synth notes. They all seem to be decaying way too quickly. Especially that warbly organ at the beginning.
The lead synth and the hi-hat together sound kind of "Casio-demo", which is more of a vaporwave thing.
I might also put more sustain on those synth notes. They all seem to be decaying way too quickly. Especially that warbly organ at the beginning.
The lead synth and the hi-hat together sound kind of "Casio-demo", which is more of a vaporwave thing.
andrushkiwt
Well-known member
1. The storm sample is horrendous. Find something clearer and cleaner.
2. Where is the snare? The beat is undeveloped.
3. You are throwing in a note which makes a minor chord into a major, halfway through its appearance. This sounds odd and off-putting. 1:26 is an example of that part. Need to take that note out.
2. Where is the snare? The beat is undeveloped.
3. You are throwing in a note which makes a minor chord into a major, halfway through its appearance. This sounds odd and off-putting. 1:26 is an example of that part. Need to take that note out.
K
Kagemono
New member
Ok thanks I'll work on that
K
Kagemono
New member
Thanks for your honesty I really appreciate it Bruh.
you know where I can find cleaner samples?
you know where I can find cleaner samples?
rob aylestone
Moderator
In have no idea what this is but it seems so random as to be a joke, surely? The monkeys laughing at the end just made me think its not serious.
Sorry - but it's pretty horrible and genre-less.
Sorry - but it's pretty horrible and genre-less.
JimmyS1969
MOODerator
Laughing monkeys? Not sure you are listening to the same track I am... lol!
The storm sample is not good. At very least it is too loud and no realism or ambience.
Try Freesound. Link HERE
B
Bulls Hit
Well-known member
For some reason I like that rain sound. The lightening sounds like the Hammer Horrors. Nice afternoon chill music
rob aylestone
Moderator
2:24 is the laughing monkeys?
VomitHatSteve
Hat STYLE. Not contents.
The BBC sample library has some storm noise that may fit the bill. (Note: technically, they're not licensed for commercial use, so you can't sell the track)
BBC Sound Effects Archive Resource • Research & Education Space
