Death Before Dishonor re-mix

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Love the writing on this jpw, great story, great rhymes and phrasing.

I found the intro harp part was a bit loud. The other times were fine volume -wise. Here's the catch though...that I'm not sure about. The harp sounds a little "distant" from the mic in the latter parts. It's more up front in the intro, which I prefer - sort of similar in vibe to the vocals. I'm thinking it's a verb thing...Just personal preference so I'll leave you with that thought.....

Great tune - it's one of my favorites.....:D
 
ido1957 said:
Love the writing on this jpw, great story, great rhymes and phrasing.

I found the intro harp part was a bit loud. The other times were fine volume -wise. Here's the catch though...that I'm not sure about. The harp sounds a little "distant" from the mic in the latter parts. It's more up front in the intro, which I prefer - sort of similar in vibe to the vocals. I'm thinking it's a verb thing...Just personal preference so I'll leave you with that thought.....

Great tune - it's one of my favorites.....:D
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Thanks man......still a work in progress......I'll get it nailed down one of these days:D
 
lets try it again...same link....real drummer, another lead line, more stuff!!!
 
The real drums really add a lot to the song jpw. The mix on the drums is good too....:D
 
The nice and melody is real nice. The sentiment is definitely nice.

The keyboard and guitar parts are really nice. The composition is really nice.

The guitar playing is also very nice. :)

A few things I'd like to comment:
1 - I'd recommend lowering the kick at least by 5-7db. It sounds upfront.
2 - Recommend adding some or some more verb to the cymbals and hats so that they echo enough between the hits to sounds a little more cohesive.
3 - The crunch of the guitar is really nice but it sound a little more dist. than you might normally hear on a song like this.

The solo is pretty cool and expressive and that's just how you should want it. :)
 
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