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luken2000
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So this is my song i´m working on right now, what do you guys think so far??
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Vocals are too dry. I konw this genere well, and others like it. If you like that mortiis kinda sound keep it.
Personally, and personally only, i like these vocals to be a bit more wet. maybe ad the littlest bit of verb and distortion. When adding your wetness make it just audiable then turn it back a bit. Espically the distortion.
I also hear no kick. Crashes are there but i gotta struggle to hear them. as the high hats.
I think maybe that acoustic picking part maybe a hair too loud and thin. Lacks fullness. and i don't know if the instrument chnages on that acoustic part or not but it seemed to jump from right to left or something.
Not bad. great start. Sounds like you have good sounds to work with.
Maybe just a bit more time making them work with each other.
Personally, and personally only, i like these vocals to be a bit more wet. maybe ad the littlest bit of verb and distortion. When adding your wetness make it just audiable then turn it back a bit. Espically the distortion.
I also hear no kick. Crashes are there but i gotta struggle to hear them. as the high hats.
I think maybe that acoustic picking part maybe a hair too loud and thin. Lacks fullness. and i don't know if the instrument chnages on that acoustic part or not but it seemed to jump from right to left or something.
Not bad. great start. Sounds like you have good sounds to work with.
Maybe just a bit more time making them work with each other.
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luken2000
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Yeah, it sure needs a lot of improving, the kick is one of the things i forgot, but had in mind. I need to play with it a while. FYI this was just a first version so i´m still improving it
Atom Bomb
Wtf is a PRS
keep coming back with improvements. I'd like to hear more.