Crits please....Garage recordings....

[James Bell]

Dp 24 recordings in the garage of my 16 years yr olds band "CONTRAST"............crits Please...............Stubborn Slumber

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[Sperry]

I listened to Stubborn Slumber.

I'd shorten it, bring the point of the song forward a bit more to the beginning.

Then put all the music onto one stereo track [you'll want decent studio monitors].

Then, thicken up the vocals through more careful recording and EQ.

Very promising. Hard to believe the shite I did when I was 16 was
considered anything at all, after hearing what kids can do today.

 

[Armistice]

Good tune.... major issues with the drum sounds for mine, and I think the left hand guitar is too fizzy and weak when it's supposed to sound awesome and killer...

I think if you could get a better recording you'd have an ace track, however, and pretty damn good for anyone, let alone 16 year olds...