Critics please?

[Grafolicious]

Sorry, didn't know which area to put this in, so many similar areas to post thread..

Hi,
currently I'm using AA 1.5 and trying out a new kind of mixing and 'mastering'
and just need other peoples' ears besides mine and my friends (who aren't too knowledgeable in this area).

I'm just hoping it sounds sorta decent atleast seeing that im using a C01U USB Condenser mic still and it's a not a great mic already to be doing vocals on but I was on a tight budget (waiting for my at4040 and edirol FA 66).

It's just a lil remix freestyle i've done and forgive me on it being this song..
Before you continue, do understand it is in the hip hop genre =D

Critique please =D
thanks

ps. If you can give pointers too, that'd be great.

Kiss Me Remix - FreestyleSession - LilSwft.mp3 - 1.38MB

 

[Porters]

Hey man,

nice kick sound. Might be the low bit rate of the mp3 but I was getting quite alot of sibilance there from the vocal. Maybe try a de esser on that. Thought the vocal sat pretty well in the mix no too over compressed. Maybe copy the vocal take compress it quite hard and mix that underneath to give more punch?

I like the track.

 

[Grafolicious]

Thanks,
and I've upgraded my mic, allooott better and smoother