Great version. This was always one of favourite Cars songs. You paid a lot of attention to the detail.
Mix wise, I'd try & bring up the rhthym guitar/backing synth, just make it a little more prominent, and maybe just a touch of reverb and/or chorus on your vocal to get it sitting inside the mix.
I like all the little touches, great job.
Edit: Hey Ed's avatar is bouncing in time to this one as well! Uncanny