Could you critique this?

[SS454]

These are some new songs I wrote. I do the recording and performances as well. I would really like a drummer, but can't find one ,so pardon the drum machine. Anyway, Here they are.

www.nowhereradio.com/nick just click "Discography" then "Singles"

Thank You

 

[strawbfan]

I really liked the sound of the clips.The on the rag bit was funny,I didn`t listen to the whole clip,but did you get the idea from Dr.Dirty aka.John Valby?He did the same song,but like I said I didn`t listen to the whole clip so your version might be different.Overall excellent job.

 

[SS454]

Yeah, I did hear the Dr. Dirty version, after I recorded that. I don't think he mentions anything about being on the rag though, he just uses Willie Nelson's "On the Road Again" as his "comedic" vehicle. Thank you for listening. I accidently posted this on the wrong site, I didn't think anyone would reply. Mahalo, Nick