Hey jeronimo,
Although not my personal proclivity of song style, I like your tune. Yes that D track needs help. IF it was live, you might wanna recut the thing.
The song itself and the delivery is very energitic and ON. Can you compress those vocals and bring them up in the mix without loosing the "flavour"? Just me but, I like the song and wanna hear it PUMP more. Maybe I should just play it louder but, I think you could tweek some more boost out of the bitch and get back the intensity that you put into it.
I know I'm only giving an ethereal and artistic review of the recording but, take to heart, I don't normally listen or reply to this genre of music.
"punch me in the gut with your mix"
Thanks for the thump in the head
Theron.