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randyfromde
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That sounds really good, nice heavy beat. A couple things:
The high frequency sound effects around the hook are hard on the ears. I was only listening to it at moderate volume at my desktop, I can't imagine hearing it at chest-thumping volume (in the club).
I also think the vocals are a little too low to be heard clearly. Just a touch higher.
Other than that, I think you hit it right on the head. Good job!
The high frequency sound effects around the hook are hard on the ears. I was only listening to it at moderate volume at my desktop, I can't imagine hearing it at chest-thumping volume (in the club).
I also think the vocals are a little too low to be heard clearly. Just a touch higher.
Other than that, I think you hit it right on the head. Good job!
Teacher
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thanks....i was very conservative wit the vocals....and the hook did trouble me...
Khompewtur
*Retired*
I like this better than the last one Teach. The keyboard f/x do sound a little shrill, and maybe even dry. Perhaps try dousing in some wide verb and making them pan from center outward during the run.
That guitar run at 4:00 just seems a bit too bare for my tastes, for it's entirety. Perhaps some accompaniment for part of it.
The vox are better this time.
That guitar run at 4:00 just seems a bit too bare for my tastes, for it's entirety. Perhaps some accompaniment for part of it.
The vox are better this time.
MISTERQCUE
Not Just Anutha Brutha
Teach, ya' got skillz baby! Voc's clean & crisp and the beat was rite and tite.
This joint was on point!
This joint was on point!
Teacher
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really its dry? i guess i have to turn up the verb and delay aux sends
yea for the bleep sound i'm probably gonna have to do an eq cut around 1k to 5 k so it doesn't interfere with vocals and doesn't hurt everyones ears
yea for the bleep sound i'm probably gonna have to do an eq cut around 1k to 5 k so it doesn't interfere with vocals and doesn't hurt everyones ears
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lynx
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Well done, like the bass riff. The fuzz keyboard may be a little loud - PC Speakers though, take it for what's worth. BTW, like your "sharp wit it", listen to it often.
Teacher
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thanks....
Khompewtur
*Retired*
Well IMO not the whole mix sounds dry, just those really high keyboard f/x. Everything else sounded right on. When i mentioned trying a verb effect it wasn't for the whole mix.
Also like i said before, i was listening and i imagined them in motion, the riff starting in the center and panning outward.
Also like i said before, i was listening and i imagined them in motion, the riff starting in the center and panning outward.
Teacher
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i wasn't talkin about the entire mix either...been there done that...i think its better to get that space within the mix...
i was talkin about the aux sends on the individual tracks for the melody...i did have verb sends to it but i guess the dry track was a bit too lound to hear it
i was talkin about the aux sends on the individual tracks for the melody...i did have verb sends to it but i guess the dry track was a bit too lound to hear it