I like the vocal harmonies, they sound pretty good.
But, I'd bring those vocal tracks into an editor and remove a lot of the breath noises, especially the one in the a capella intro: Cruise with me and let the wind blow HUGE BREATH Smooth with... The breath in that same line is rather loud during the chorus as well.
Maybe it's because the big breath in the beginning got me listening, but the breaths are pretty prominent throughout the entire song. I wouldn't remove them all because it might sound unnatural, but I'd edit out the really loud ones and maybe reduce the volume of some of the softer ones.
It's *kinda* easy listening, but it's still pretty good.
thanks mwthompson. i had already taken out some of the breaths but everytime i listened to it afterwards, i had a kind of suffocating feeling cause i was expecting a breath, so i left the others. i guess though the compressor made them louder than they really are. i guess i might make them a little quieter though.